Show Don't Tell

1. The party had music. It was called the Electric Slide. The people dancing to the Electric Slide were all dancing the same dance. They would go back and forth, then they would do a grape vine.
2. I walked into the classroom and there on my desk was a piece of paper. Then I sat down at my desk and turned the paper over. On my paper there was a big A in red. I started texting all my friends saying that I got an A on my test because I was extremly excited.
3. I went into the classroom and there he was the coolest teacher ever. Playing oldies music and sitting in his chair.
4. Its white with an apple on it. I take it everywhere and it goes with me where ever I go. We do everything together. It looks important information up for me and it loads my pictures. Its my best friend ever.
5. I had nothing to do. I just sat there. No TV, no ipod. I just sat there doing nothing.